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    OmarEhab

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    Age : 20
    Location : Cairo, Egypt

    My Intro

    Post by OmarEhab on Wed Aug 03, 2011 9:30 pm

    Hi, My name is Omar some people call me Jack (Long story.) I'm 14 and I'm a Harry Potter fan. Memorized all the spells. I write fantasy and I enjoy writing a lot I guess. I listen to music, pop mainly and rap but sometimes R&B. I LOVE reading and writing.

    I was born is Salt Lake City, Utah, USA. I live in Cairo, Egypt now. GO EGYPT!! XD ! I'm writing a novel currently and it's about assassins. Where's the fantasy in that?! You'll see later on XD!

    Well, I love soccer, video games, um...baseball, American football.

    Yep that's about it

    Cya,

    Omar
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    Emma

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    Age : 23
    Location : Scotland

    Re: My Intro

    Post by Emma on Wed Aug 03, 2011 9:36 pm

    Hey Omar (or Jack...which do you prefer?)

    Hmmm assassins and fantasy - sounds great! Super original, which of course is obviously one of the most important things when writing (well, at least it is in my opinion). How far are you along in it?
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    Mac
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    Re: My Intro

    Post by Mac on Wed Aug 03, 2011 9:39 pm

    Hey Jack,
    Even though I could probably drag the mouse to MSN to welcome you, I think I'll welcome you here.
    Welcome! There's not much I can say though, since we pretty much are twins, apart from the fact we were born in different places, we look different and our story ideas are different.
    Can't wait to read the bit where the fantasy starts Wink

    Mac
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    OmarEhab

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    Re: My Intro

    Post by OmarEhab on Wed Aug 03, 2011 9:47 pm

    Hey Emma! You can call me anything it doesn't matter! I've done 15,000 words so far!!

    Mac hahahaha! The fantasy is comin soon bro REAL SOON!
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    Joce
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    Re: My Intro

    Post by Joce on Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:33 pm

    Hey, Jack. Nice to meet you, I live in Egypt , too , but in El Mansoura. Can't wait to check that fantasy.
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    OmarEhab

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    Re: My Intro

    Post by OmarEhab on Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:30 am

    Hey all!!

    Well I posted the prologue of my novel here and I'd like some review guys!

    Thanks,

    Jack
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    Maris

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    Re: My Intro

    Post by Maris on Thu Aug 04, 2011 11:16 am

    Hi, Omar! It's nice to meet you Smile
    I'm off to check out your prologue now.
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    OmarEhab

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    Re: My Intro

    Post by OmarEhab on Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:08 pm

    Well guys I wanted to thank you all for the review on my prologue! It helped me a lot and Maris you did misunderstand the sentence! Those men were gaining money from drugs. And about the last 2 paragraphs allll will be clear in Chapter One.

    Omar
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    Maris

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    Re: My Intro

    Post by Maris on Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:32 pm

    Silly me
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    OmarEhab

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    Re: My Intro

    Post by OmarEhab on Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:34 pm

    Hahahaa everyone makes mistakes! And should I post chapter one?
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    Maris

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    Re: My Intro

    Post by Maris on Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:39 pm

    Yes, I'd like to read it. Smile
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    OmarEhab

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    Re: My Intro

    Post by OmarEhab on Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:52 pm

    POSTED CHAPTER ONE!!!
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    Mac
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    Re: My Intro

    Post by Mac on Thu Aug 04, 2011 5:42 pm

    Just posted my review for it Very Happy
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    Joce
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    Re: My Intro

    Post by Joce on Thu Aug 04, 2011 6:12 pm

    Ahmadblues wrote:Just posted my review for it Very Happy
    Me too.

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