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    Who's forgotten about me????

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    Hailey

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    Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Hailey on Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:24 pm

    Hello peoples who probably have forgotten all about me. I have a very good reason for not getting on much. My mare, Gracie, has been taking up ALL my time. If i'm not training for barrels, i'm working of no-tack riding. If it's not that, it's the feed store or tack store. Then I'm at a rodeo every weekend, vet once every month. I barely have time to sleep! I've kept up my writing, luckily. I will post some things later on. (I'm writing this during class._
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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Mac on Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:35 pm

    I was beginning to wonder where you were!

    :O Tut tut. That's naughty to be writing this in class (Hey, Hailey's teacher, Hailey's doing something educational. Don't worry.).

    New work? Yay Smile Oh and while you were gone, we kinda stalked everyone and found out where everyone lives (the town at least). You live in Greenville, somewhere in the Teneessee/Carolina area (I can't spell it, sorry). Don't feel freaked out. I was surprised when they discovered a road not far from my house...
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    Hailey

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    Post by Hailey on Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:40 pm

    Yes, I do live about 2 miles out of Greenville, and i'm not freaked xD. Tennessee is about 4 hours away, and we have to go through North Carolina to get to it. I live 30 minutes from North Carolina. I live in South Carolina. Not much a difference between the two other than the names. Smile And yes, new work. I'll post it when my teacher isn't watching. xD
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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Mac on Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:48 pm

    South Carolina? Wasn't that hit by Irene? I do hope it wasn't ...

    I'm bad with US states - I live in London.

    What class do you have?
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    Hailey

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    Post by Hailey on Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:52 pm

    Yes, it was. Just a tiny bit though. No major damage done here.

    I just got out of State History. I just made a 78 on my quiz too. Maybe I should get off my phone during quizzes. xD But i'm not gonna.
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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Tia on Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:54 pm

    Hi Hailey! Nice to see you.

    I didn't understand half the things you said about horses, but alright XD
    I can tell it's taking up a lot of your time.

    Yaaay, I love new work Very Happy

    Nah, don't. I'm always on my phone during classes too.
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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Mac on Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:58 pm

    My phone's internet is dodgy...
    What's state history? Is it History that's only about the USA?
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    Post by Hailey on Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:01 pm

    Nope, it's just my state. We look back on things that focus on how we affected the growth of USA. Yeah. We're rebels. We caused the civil war. xD
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    Post by Mac on Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:03 pm

    LMAO XD Well done... what can I say? XD

    The only thing that's interesting about my area is that Van Gogh lived here for a few months. So interesting...
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    Post by Hailey on Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:06 pm

    Haha We're pretty boring to outside people. xD Most of the land now is horse country. Big shocker, huh? Van Gogh's pretty cool.
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    Post by Mac on Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:11 pm

    Yeah, but there are cooler stuff... Wait I know a really cool one. Not as cool as yours but still - our area was the site of a major civil war battle.
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    Post by Hailey on Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:20 pm

    Awesome!

    ARG! NO HISTORY TEACHER I AM NOT STUDYING! I DO NOT HAVE TIME TO STUDY! CAN I STAB YOU WITH A SPORK?
    I hate my teachers.... with a burning passion. How will knowing how many Indians live in Cherokee help me become a horse trainer? I thought so!
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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Mac on Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:20 pm

    I love sporks. Especially when ordering KFC, they remind me of KFC coleslow. Mm...
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    Post by Hailey on Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:24 pm

    YOU HAVE KFC OVER THERE? AWESOME! And KFC Potatoes are beast.
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    Post by Mac on Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:27 pm

    And McDonalds, and Burger King... everything in America is bound to be in the rest of the world. Trust me.

    You use the same slang as well!

    McDonald's apple pies are beast. Definitely. (I don't normally eat from fast food restaurants but when I get my hands on an apple pie... *melts*)
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    Post by Hailey on Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:31 pm

    xD I was a vegetarian for 3 years, but when I started rodeo it got kind of hard to keep that up. You don't have time to sit in at a restaurant like Golden Corral or Applebee's when you do rodeo. You have to pull a horse trailer through a McDonalds or Arby's drive through. xD Some of the looks we get. I'll be in full rodeo attire walking around Wal-mart for duct-tape or something. It's hilarious. Rodeo's kind of a redneck thing so you don't get picky. xD
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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Mac on Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:47 pm

    What's Rodeo?

    Oh and here are all the things you might've missed while you were away:

    1. Joce set up a fanfic forum and I got the great idea (I'm being modest Wink ) of having a character interview forum which Joce thought was a good idea and set up too.
    2. Maris disappeared (noo! Come back!)
    3. 5 new members: MPC and Bec Dailey who've not visited and we've not heard from them at all, Dotandscribble (aka Dot), who's disappeared too Sad, mybestfriendrocks who is Dot's best friend and has disappeared after introducing their self and Ian, Emma's younger brother.
    4. Omar/Jack has to rewrite 100+ of work in third person, (LOL! That's so mean. I bet it'll be good when he's done).
    5. I came 1st person in post numbers
    6. We've stalked everyone in the 'Who is Online' section at the bottom of the forum.

    A lot has been going on Wink
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    Hailey

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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Hailey on Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:57 pm

    Oh no! I must get on every day then! I'm posting new work now.
    HOW DO YOU NOT KNOW WHAT RODEO IS???


    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iyAQiOvFFvk

    Barrel racing,
    Pole bending
    goat tying
    Bull riding
    Bronc riding
    Team Roping
    Breakaway roping
    Chute Doging
    Calf roping

    I barrel race, Pole Bend and goat tie. I'm hoping to start bull riding though.
    Barrel racing: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bryG23bBQDg&feature=related
    Pole Bending: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MBo8OwG4ALE&feature=related
    Goat tying: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GMiBtGu3L2c
    Bull riding: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dmxtHv6WpR0
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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Mac on Tue Sep 06, 2011 4:09 pm

    Looks cool...!
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    Emma

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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Emma on Tue Sep 06, 2011 6:46 pm

    Hey Hailey!
    I've been wondering where you had got to Razz


    Oh no! I must get on every day then!

    ^You better! Very Happy
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    Hailey

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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Hailey on Tue Sep 06, 2011 11:02 pm

    Haha I'll try!
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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Joce on Wed Sep 07, 2011 1:57 pm

    Greenville? Mississippi? Guess, I should of known, when you said 4-H.
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    Hailey

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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Hailey on Wed Sep 07, 2011 5:07 pm

    Greenville South Carolina, actually. xD But we have 4-H, too.

    Ok so guys don't kill me.... I just took on ANOTHER horse to ride today.... so less time.
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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Mac on Thu Sep 08, 2011 7:32 pm

    4-H? Uh... OK...

    Ooh, Joce, which state are you from in the US? I hope you don't mind me asking.

    Another horse, Hailey? Wow... you must be passionate about horses [/understatement]
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    Hailey

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    Re: Who's forgotten about me????

    Post by Hailey on Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:18 pm

    Haha yes another horse. Am I not crazy?

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