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Teen Writers Critique Group

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    Hailey

    Posts : 100
    Join date : 2011-08-05
    Age : 19
    Location : USA

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    Post by Hailey on Thu Sep 08, 2011 2:07 am

    Clare and Eli have been friends for many years, before Julia even came into the picture. Now, Julia and Eli have a child. They’re forced to handle school, friends and a 2-year-old. When Eli realizes his feelings for Clare are more than just those for a good friend, he risks his family to fulfill his heart. But Clare and her body share a secret that could ruin everything.

    Would this make you want to read my fanfiction?
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    Emma

    Posts : 216
    Join date : 2011-08-03
    Age : 23
    Location : Scotland

    Re: Summary

    Post by Emma on Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:13 am

    Potentially Smile

    I'm not usually a fan of this sort of thing and I was thinking "no, no, no" UNTIL I read the last line, which has made me quite curious. So curious, in fact, that I might be willing to ignore my normal dislike of these stories and give it a go!
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    Tia

    Posts : 285
    Join date : 2011-08-05
    Age : 21
    Location : Dubrovnik, Croatia

    Re: Summary

    Post by Tia on Thu Sep 08, 2011 11:52 am

    Yeah, I'd give it a go. I like reading romances, so why not? Also, like Emma said, your last line gives it some mystery, so I'd definitely check it out.
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    Mac
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    Join date : 2011-08-03
    Age : 20
    Location : North Korea

    Re: Summary

    Post by Mac on Thu Sep 08, 2011 5:46 pm

    Perhaps...
    I'm not sure if I'd get into this, but it sounds interesting and intriguing Smile I think the trick for this fanfic is if we're hooked right from the start and we're hooked the whole way through Smile I think that's the trick with genres we aren't as into.

    Please post it! Very Happy
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    Hailey

    Posts : 100
    Join date : 2011-08-05
    Age : 19
    Location : USA

    Re: Summary

    Post by Hailey on Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:21 pm

    I will try and post the preface and some of the first chapter
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    Lizzie

    Posts : 272
    Join date : 2011-08-05
    Age : 20
    Location : Nose deep in a book

    Re: Summary

    Post by Lizzie on Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:29 pm

    Hmmm, yeah I'd read it.
    I like to use a few lines from the actual story as a summary. A line that explains everything that's going on in the story, but still reveals nothing. Maybe you should try that.

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