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    Something I thought I should share.

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    Hailey

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    Something I thought I should share.

    Post by Hailey on Fri Sep 16, 2011 11:27 pm

    I found this and related so much. I figured I would share it.

    Hello sir, remember me?
    I'm the man you'd thought I'd never be,
    the boy who you reduced to tears,
    the lad called 'thingy' for 6 whole years.

    Yeah, thats right, my name's bob
    the one who landed the popstars job,
    the one who you told look don't touch,
    the kid who wouldn't amount to much.

    Well I'm here and you're still there
    with your fake sports car and your receding hair,
    dodgy farra trousers that you think are smart,
    married to the woman that teaches art,
    married to the life, married to the school,
    I wanna sing and dance sir, now who's the fool?

    Sing and dance? you thought I was barmy-
    Settle down 'thingy', join the army.
    And who were you to tell me this?
    The dream I want I'll have to miss.

    Sir is god...
    He's been given the right to structure lives overnight.

    Now I know life's true path,
    tanks and guns that'll be a laugh.
    Nah not me , I'm a mega civillian,
    I wont lead my life riding pillian.

    But thanks for the advice,
    I'm sure it'll do
    for the negative dickheads, just like you!
    As for now I've a different weapon-
    Stage and screen is about to beckon.
    And here I sit in first class...
    Bollocks sir, kiss my ass!
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    Lizzie

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    Re: Something I thought I should share.

    Post by Lizzie on Sat Sep 17, 2011 10:57 am



    I LOVE IT!!! I can relate to it soooooo much. There's always someone in your life who thinks your worthless and that you won't amount to anything. Who cares?!
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    Mac
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    Re: Something I thought I should share.

    Post by Mac on Sat Sep 17, 2011 12:12 pm

    Agreed! This is extremely relateable ('K can't spell that then). It reminds me of Jessie J's song 'Who's laughing now'. Look it up Smile
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    Joce
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    Re: Something I thought I should share.

    Post by Joce on Sat Sep 17, 2011 12:30 pm

    Agreed.
    Bollocks sir, kiss my ass!
    Sorry, I felt like that needed to be said again.
    Bollocks sir, kiss my ass!
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    Lizzie

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    Re: Something I thought I should share.

    Post by Lizzie on Sun Sep 18, 2011 5:57 pm

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    Hailey

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    Re: Something I thought I should share.

    Post by Hailey on Sun Sep 18, 2011 7:02 pm


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